Saturday, 21 June 2014

New Designers - Edit 1

This is an edit of the original film with a quicker pace. The shots are trimmed and neatened to have only the essential time to allow the action to get across without lingering. It is yet to include the additional shots of story in places that help the father son relationship develop more by filling in unanswered questions. They'll help the story read better for an audience. The team is currently working on these additions so expect them to appear in the next few days.

As always feedback is welcome... particularly if you feel there is still unnecessary shots or a shot lingers still too much.

As it stands 1 min and 40 sec knocked off the original running time. Some rest and revisit with fresh eye might meet with even more trimming!



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